Young Love

Personal. Yeah, just read it.

We jumped into us,

unbound and free

without a care.

But as the months rolled by,

your love shriveled up

and you left me out to dry.

So here I sit, writing songs,

pleading for affection.

But you moved on,

to higher dreams, to live your life,

as you watch me beg and cry.

So alone I'll lay, fading fast,

my blood rushing from my lips.

It's better this, to die in pain,

than wishing I was with you,

again. . .

Author's Note

Cupcakes at 11 pm, nothing like it folks. But yeah, review and shit.

Reviews

[Aino A Järvinen]

Well said, "better... to die in pain, than wishing I was with you, again." Thank you for gracing us mere mortals with your fishy powers.

[teardrop]

Wow very powerful, luved this

[Zelle]

awesomely written! thank u for sharing! :)

[Criss ;)]

Nicely penned...your writing link, as i clicked i got what you wanted to say...even i've been saved your "Quizzila" writing page in my homepage, your thinking'' about young love's quite new and well flourished..
every line's damn great and well written, don't say you're gonna add few more lines, or else i'm gonna mad at your this write...lol :P

have this 101 / 100 :)

[Zap-the-awesome]

Great work. I can understand its meaning and relate. That's something that many poets seem to not do very well