Rain Drops

Sitting outside in the rain can give you a feeling of bliss, like nature's tears are washing away all the dirt of everyday life.

The rain washes away the traces

of your despicable actions.

The demons with faces

have fallen at last.

And at the end of the storm,

what will you find?

A happiness in a different form,

One that gives you peace of mind.

Author's Note

I hope this give you the rejuvenation I felt when I wrote it.

Reviews

[Aino A Järvinen]

Indeed. Rain, tears vicariously wept through Gaea. Purifying and relieving. Good writing.

[Criss ;)]

I always love to read stuffs that on rain...even i've made my one song on the tittle "RAIN" here, your this write makes me to the world of rain where i'm standing down and just wetting in rain and trying to wash my pain...you know what i loved this one
And at the end of the storm,
what will you find?
A happiness in a different form,
One that gives you peace of mind.
....have this 200/100 :)

[Johanna]

REally nice! Well written.. liked it, I felt like this poem was cool, don´t know if that´s the right word to use but yeah.. Kind of strong as well, like the poem grabbed it´s strength and it´s own peace of mind.

[zainul]

This is true.
At the end of the storm peace of mind may be felt.

[j michael kaisner]

So, I'm really digging your use of creepiness. Please keep posting!