Monsters

Every one told me of the
Monsters that lived under my bed.
But, what every one failed to mention
Was the ones that lived in my head.

Author's Note

It the grammar and punctuation correct? Do you think it's to short, what do you think of it all together?

Reviews

[ElanaM]

This poem is striking and pierces me to my soul. I like the idea from this writing and the thoughts you easily convey. We all have monsters and demons in us. I enjoy your works. I would hope to one day write like you do. Applause.

[Sam]

Thank you so much!!!!