Money

Nobody understands why people are so greedy for money,even though money can make you a slave or destroy happiness.

Money money money 

Everywhere is money

 What do I do I can't find happiness...

Money money money

 Everywhere is poverty

 What do I do I can't find empathy... 

Money money money

 Everyone is about money

 What do I do I can't find love ... 

Money money money

 Everything is about money 

Yet, nothing is all about money...

What am I to do Where do I find freedom ...

Reviews

[MadalaJose]

Your repetition of the first line throughout all the stanzas, create a rhythm and also put an emphasis on money. And as a reader I am like "what's with money" and you drive the message home by telling how although people are so hungry for money, money doesn't give happiness or satisfaction.

its a very moral piece. I like it

[Senu Jayasinghe]

Thank you very much for your thoughts. I am very happy to know that my intention of the wording to 'drive the message home' has succeded. Thnk you.😆

[MadalaJose]

you are welcome

[Michael Mendez]

I didn't understand it fully at first then I read it again. I liked it. 👍

[Senu Jayasinghe]

Thnx for the review. It ws encouraging ...