Testing the waters, of destiny?

Testing the waters, of destiny?

A Poem by Luke Sentnl
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Controlled vocabulary, to provoke thought and emotion.

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 In the absence of justification, our guidance is that of a star dieing. A final eruption of limitless power, shrouding the skies above us in absolutes.
So much momentum for everything to be peaceful, yet the inertia of life leads us all to treachery.

© 2009 Luke Sentnl


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i like it. its interesting and different then other things that tend to be written. great vocabulary! structure could use a bit of work but other than that, its great. thanks for posting it.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on December 18, 2009

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Luke Sentnl
Luke Sentnl

Sydney, Australia



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