Nurtured response.

Nurtured response.

Chasing verbal sustenance within the dominion of the many, the sounds of the few are valued lavishly over the noise of the many.
Caught in the wind, it soothes only but the stillness that is my sky. To re-engage in a resplendent ascension, towards desires and reverie

 

Reviews

[Bertie]

Obviously a lot of hyperbolic language, perhaps too ornate ? Sometimes its better to have flow than to use the bbest language in your vocabulary which is clearly quite extensive.
Its a lovely little poem, gives me lots of food for thought :)
keep it up