Ever.

Never to be forever...

They say that love is the slowest form of suicide.

They also say that it has endless dead ends and uneven paths

Some good,

some bad.

But for me, love is leaving.

Leaving for the sake of his sanity

or for the sake of my humanity.

When love tugs at your heart

as if to spill all the notes of a dieing soul,

I leave quick

before I become a wreck.

I leave far,

far too away.

Forever and ever baby

that's what you said.

But i can't bare to see you smile,

while your soul is devoured.

by this cursed thing called love.

That which is more beautiful then a dove.

Please don't cry

just look away

like I do now.

For the sake of your humanity,

and for the sake of my sanity,

please just look away.

So you and I

can't be

Forever and ever, babe.

Author's Note

plz tell me if i did something wrong, i feel if-y about this peice. Ignore grammer mistakes.

Reviews

[BULLET FOR MY VALENTINE]

Sweetheart you have shown how love can shine and be so devine
your tender words have caressed my page
and made me feel younger in age
i believe that you feel everything that you write from the heart
and i know some guide angel has brought you to my page
i feel a coonection with you but realise
that life is only to feel blue
boyfriends and commitments would end this desire
to bring about a friendship much more a desire

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Love is certainly confusing and very powerful... the thing bout love is it is never to blame, it is the people who use it as a weapon to get what they want... it can cause people to want to run from it in fear... I believe love is worth the chance but I can understand the powerful sentiment you expressed in this creative piece.

[barricade]

Wow! this was one strong write! so emotionally powerful!!! deep feelings expressed with such brilliance...a truly commendable write!

"Please don't cry
just look away
like I do now.
For the sake of your humanity,
and for the sake of my sanity,
please just look away.
So you and I
can't be
Forever and ever, babe."

deeply moving...
great work!

regards
barricade....

[Jason]

Beautiful. This is a powerful work of art. In all the emotions of love and it's rollercoaster...you have truly captured a deep emotion and displayed it's true depth....with a great use of metaphors. My favorite of which being the comparision of love being a slow form of suicide. Brilliant. Absolutely brilliant!

Jay

[Loreana]

I absolutely loved your poem. I found it absolutely true too.
I don't think you should worry too much about the grammar in your poem either.... the poem is still amazing. :D

[deeps]

But for me, love is leaving.
Leaving for the sake of his sanity
or for the sake of my humanity.
When love tugs at your heart
as if to spill all the notes of a dieing soul,

Awesome words here, So truthful too
This is an emotional write. I like this.
Ah! don't worry too much on grammar
A poem comes from out heart and soul
and that can't be judged. Wonderful write.