Whispering Dream

Small water droplets hanging in the air, embracing hills at twilight.

Swaying shadows of roses coloured white.

Feeling the coldness of your heart as you hold me tight.

Evergreens silhouetted on a full moon night.

Stars lighting up the heavens with different colours creating a symphony of delight.

Your freezing hands caressing my skin as I slowly become paralyzed.

Hearing whispers around me trying to understand it in my mind.

The sounds of birds suddenly awakening me from slumber to a life full of spite.

*Ş.Ü*

Reviews

[Twilight]

Firstly, I concur with what Arundass has said about this one. I would have reviewed it sooner, but did not notice in my "news feed"; that you had added another.

Curiously, the male lover in this piece is cold hearted. And yet, you still seem to allow him; to take you in passion.

On the otherhand, you admit to being paralysed towards the end; at the sensation of his "freezing hands". It happens slowly, as you secretly want it to.?

But, you also seem potentially vexed and doubtful; with your hearing of those "whispers". Your conscience or feminine instinct, advising caution perhaps?

Of course, only the writer knows for sure. And, it's taken from dreamy inspirational feelings.?

At the very end, those chirping birds seem to awaken you to the reality; of a new morning ahead. Along with, what you regard as "a life full of spite". However, not spiteful living from yourself. More likely, that ingrained spitefulness which seems to pervade around us - in modern societal living..?

Thanks for sharing, Senay.

[Şenay🥀]

She can not see the man's true nature, because he has hidden it very well. Thus are the beautiful surroundings wich are not real.
Yes, as always, your interpretation is outstanding. Thank you for your review, appreciate it.

[Twilight]

Thanks. Ironically sad, that the "beautiful surroundings" here; are only from imagination. Whereas, the man's true nature is only too real. Even so, the woman should in no way be written off as stupid; for falling victim to his allure. Indeed, when they originally became lovers; she could have only known so much about this guy. Particularly, if he had manipulated this woman; told falsehoods or hidden any difficult home truths about himself. Just nature too, that situations can develop; in which a woman becomes trapped by her man. Either trapped emotionally, or down to her circumstances at the time. Potentially, even more complexed for that woman; if she has struggled to escape from any instinctive but irrational (in hindsight) fondness which she may have held for him.? Such is life, sometimes..!

[Şenay🥀]

Yes, you are very right about that.
It is unfortunately the result of manipulation, psychological abuse from a narcissistic spouse/partner.
Thank you.

[Antoñyo]

I took from this, no matter the surrounding beauty, perceived or otherwise, the gist of people we truly want to know finds its way to the surface for eyes (both pair) to see.
Thanks for the share

[Şenay🥀]

Yes, sooner or later we see them for what they truly are.
Thank you for reading and reviewing my poem.

[Throwing Romeo]

is romance loves unfulfilled desire? This poetry cries for
warmer genuine truest
kind of love. The kind that
grows, intertwines over
time and becomes solid.
Imagry to rember and
a clear delicate voice.

R.

[Şenay🥀]

Yes, I think we all long for this kind of love, but it is rare to find the genuine truest kind of love. Especially in the period we live in now.

Thank you for reading and reviewing my poem, appreciate it.

[Arundass TP]

Beautiful poem. Vivid imagery. Loved it

[Şenay🥀]

Thank you for your review. Glad you liked it.

[Ballpark Frank]

I like this! You are a skilled poet Senay. You say a book load in a few lines.

A gut wrenching situation though. I'm 😞 sorry.

[Şenay🥀]

Thank you for your very kind review. Happy you liked it 🙂
Yes, it was in an other period of life. All is left in the past