Poisonous Love

Like the wind stroking leaves, causing it falling from the tree.

Like water kissing fire, extinguishing it suddenly.

Like snow touching ground, melting slowly.

Like the moon meeting the sun, covering it completely.

So was your love, poisoning me intentionally.

Trusting blindly, while you consumed my soul cruelly.

My heart surrendering passionately, only to be destroyed fiercely.

My mind embracing loneliness, determining my destiny.

*Ş.Ü*

Reviews

[Richard🖌]

I welcome you to the Café, Şenay 🌺🐝

Ohhh, it breaks my heart 💔
then, tears it all apart.
'Twas from the start,
I knew we'd part.

There's no doubt, Şenay,
of that which you say.
Hopefully, someday,
pain will fly away.

Until that far off time,
love to me is crime.
Until this rhyme,
turns sublime.

Well, what's to say, Şenay, except the poignant sadness of your tender words gripped me in their sorrow.
Perhaps, I'll read them here tomorrow, and the four winds will blow all hurt away, so happiness can stay.

"Til then, let's dance 'n grin, we'll twirl and spin, and laugh again 'n again! 💃🕺

Sad, but wonderfully moving poetry, Şenay.
Thank you sincerely for sharing! ⁓ Richard🖌️

[Franky]

This is expertly done. The pain and anguish of heartbreak is seamlessly shown. Nice descriptive words