All Or Nothing

All Or Nothing

A Poem by semaj
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The first three lines were inspired by Marissa Tomei while I was watching Cyrus and I just went from there.

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Her hair is a lion, which only she can tame
Her eyes will pierce your soul, and relieve all of your pain
Her smile shines brighter than the brightest sun
Her touch so soft, your senses will come undone
She is all that you want, all that you desire
She'll make your dreams come true, then set your world on fire 
For her love is not free, it comes at a cost
The simple price of your soul, will be your only loss
If you're willing to pay the toll, she's all yours
Your temptress, your nymph, your goddess, all that and much more

© 2014 semaj


Author's Note

semaj
I guess it ended up being about how a woman's love can be everything you ever need, but, if you betray her, you will deeply regret it.

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First off I want to pay my respects to a man who serves in the Navy, and to all those who serve our flag.

As a some what of a 'know nothing critic', I can feel the over all emotion that you are conveying or 'laying along side', there is a passion that should be and will be recognized as a romantic piece with teeth.

I enjoyed this an I hope you will keep writing.

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Added on May 22, 2014
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Tags: Marissa Tomei, Love, Woman's love, passion

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Im james. I'm 24 years old serving in the navy. I like to write as a hobby. Most of my inspiration comes when I haven't slept lol. more..

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