THREE DAYS IN HELL

This is for the world's most beautiful girl.pls come back..

These three days,
it was hard to sustain,
the truth that you left over,
with a say,
that there was nothing,
nothing between two united soul...

I may be mad,
i may be crazy,
but its not just me in all,
but it is you in me,
which drives me whole,
drifting me into,
those scary future,
where you are away,
away from where,
i can't just even dare...

Hoping that you would return,
clearing those concrete walls,
build by the fear of world,
build by the doubt of soul,
but i promise,
just hold my hands,
imposing yours on mine,
and i can fight with all,
to take you apart,
with a joy of life,
and something more than that..

Pls come.....will you?

Author's Note

Its just a usual poem to relieve myself from my sadness...

Reviews

[Lokesh]

The second stanza is powerful.
-Swargasmith

[*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*]

Amazing how a significant other can such an affect on our hearts and minds. Nicely done.

[Suditi]

You amaze me!
So intense!
This poem is so full of emotions!
Keep it up! :)

[17vigil]

I know how you feel man its touching, it hard to describe how I feel but you did good!

[Pax]

nice...
sadness and broken hearts makes beautiful poems..
if you feel she's still loved u then fight for it.
if she's happy with someone else then learn to love her at heart, give what's makes her happy and set yourself free//

[Thea]

I felt the overflowing sadness in this poem...There's much love you have for that girl...Great poem!
:)))

[Sleeping Maiden]

Awww, this was sad but sweet at the same time! The passion you have for this girl really shows here.. =)
Hope she sees you and the love you have for her.
Great write!