WORLD OF TWO

Its a tribute to those in true love.You only love to spend time with her/him and she/he means everything for you..just fall in love again with those lovely cherished moments of yours with these lines.

Bound to time,
tied to tide,
the colors do gloom,
with eternal touch,
yet under the shades,
but well in soul,
they love they sing,
they live they give....

Two hearts,
one soul,
few words,
one goal,
they live their own,
as its the end,
for there is no tomorrow,
for there is no need,
when they could,
spread the scent,
on their ways,
moving together,
within their days....

Silence takes their heart,
beyond the word's game,
with millions of meanings,
their each breath carry,
which only those birds do know,
for there is a joy,
in flying so high,
in flying so alone,
with the one you love,
with the one you live.....

Author's Note

Do give your valuable review because that's what motivates me to make myself better....any kind of positive or negative reviews are welcomed.

Reviews

[Sleeping Maiden]

So inspiring!! You make me feel the bliss in true love..
It's true when you're with someone you love so much, you can't bear to be without him or her... that type of love is something to fight for.
I love this piece so much. It makes me hope for love..
Thanks for writing this. =) It made me smile.

[Suditi]

Yeah okay!
Alone as in "together isolated" wala alone!
Okay thanks!
Of course its justified! Like i said, amazing poem :D

[Maryam]

I like it. It reads and flows well. Good job!

[$êlvån]

@Suditi tanx 4 d review....in last lines i meant to say that the guys in love have their own world which is away from reality and life..they just fly high from all the odds of life..they love to be in their isolated world so i just used the word alone(means they just need eachother's shoulder)..hope its justified..wat u say?

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@Suditi tanx 4 d review....in last lines i meant to say that the guys in love have their own world which is away from reality and life..they just fly high from all the odds of life..they love to isolated so i just the word alone(means they just need eachother's shoulder)..hope its justified..wat u say?

[Suditi]

I am not gonna pretend that i know what it feels like.. to be in love..
But this is a great poem..It speaks volumes.
Though i am a little confused with "in flying so high,
in flying so alone,
with the one you love"
Isnt it sort of contradictory?
Nevertheless, Amazing poem :)