WORLD OF TWO

Its a tribute to those in true love.You only love to spend time with her/him and she/he means everything for you..just fall in love again with those lovely cherished moments of yours with these lines.

Bound to time,
tied to tide,
the colors do gloom,
with eternal touch,
yet under the shades,
but well in soul,
they love they sing,
they live they give....

Two hearts,
one soul,
few words,
one goal,
they live their own,
as its the end,
for there is no tomorrow,
for there is no need,
when they could,
spread the scent,
on their ways,
moving together,
within their days....

Silence takes their heart,
beyond the word's game,
with millions of meanings,
their each breath carry,
which only those birds do know,
for there is a joy,
in flying so high,
in flying so alone,
with the one you love,
with the one you live.....

Author's Note

Do give your valuable review because that's what motivates me to make myself better....any kind of positive or negative reviews are welcomed.

Reviews

[Sleeping Maiden]

So inspiring!! You make me feel the bliss in true love..
It's true when you're with someone you love so much, you can't bear to be without him or her... that type of love is something to fight for.
I love this piece so much. It makes me hope for love..
Thanks for writing this. =) It made me smile.

[Aehr]

two hearts one soul... wonderful!

[Kuhr Gred]

:) i thinks anyone who read this poem will be glad.. because they know what is the meaning of true love :) ! GREAT WRITE :))

[Bidu Ibrahim]

Awesome! Nice read.

[Arte]

Thanks for sharing, i love it very much.

[M]

beautiful poem though the pacing is a bit rough for me.

[Geraldine]

The second stanza is my favorite. Nice job.

[ghost writer]

thats a positive and unlifting message..nicely done.

[just is]

Such an intriguing write here and quite interesting.
I enjoyed this. Very nicely to read.

[Rae Emeral]

This is a very intriguing poem. Beautifully written and enjoyable to read. :) It brought a smile to my face while I read it. Love is a wonderful thing. Nice job.
~Rae