NOTHING MUCH TO WRITE ABOUT

NOTHING MUCH TO WRITE ABOUT

A Poem by $êlvån

Today everything seems so simple,
and nothing much to write about!

So again i started writing,
a tale which belongs to past,
a dream which belongs to future!

Whenever you were with me,
i was never me!
But now too ,myself lost in dark!!

Do you feel i should still wait,
and spend seeing the endless roads!!
Hope you ever felt anything,
for i can hope you will feel the above??.

Moons remained natural,
why does this love fantise,
tree shed roses,
why does my soul cry!!

© 2012 $êlvån


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I love your 2nd stanza somehow..
this poem is really good. =) Wonderfully done. Your emotions are expressed well. Honest, straight-forward, and a bit saddening.


Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I don't know but I loved the first two lines. haha :D

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

tanx roxi.....:)..cheers

Posted 12 Years Ago


Oh Wow, i simply loved your last two lines,
This is really amazing...
Such depth and some truth in this powerful rite.
So nicely presented.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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$êlvån
$êlvån

delhi, Humanity, India



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Different from the world but so similar like the other guys out here!! -A typical 18year boy with some dreams which are within my reach.. -i'm not lazy but i usually don't employ myself in anything .. more..

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