HOW TO TELL YOU MY LOVE

I know i am taking,
little more to spell it out!
Least did i let you know,
that you were in my each breathe....

This day i am writing,
my non-fantaised real epic,
for all i had for you,
and hope you will read it....

I have strenght to stand the tides,
yet so weak to face my love,
may be i am worried to lose,
for what all you were to me......

You talked so much,
i rarely got my turn,
but ask your showdow(or paintings),
for they were all silent.....

Let these lines,
speak for me.
For i know your heart,
you do ease for me....

Oh!will i ever get courage,
to face my lovely soul,
as i know i don't,
have that(courage) to see her let go............

Reviews

[E. Ryan Miller]

Again, work on capitalization (all "I"s should be capitalized in prose and poetry). Also, the word "strenght" has a typo - it should be "strength.

Other than that, this is a poem that has feeling. I loved the phrase "to face my lovely soul". It carries an emotional power, as well as is very beautiful poetry.

[$êlvån]

@Thrinna i told that word :p..reply ws not wat i expected:)

[Thea]

This was really sweet...It's really hard confessing your feelings to the person you like...Such a very well expressed poem. Well done!
:)))

[Sahar moonlight]

The flow in your poem is really perfect.
Everyline takes youto the other so gently.
And over all, it was so sweet :)

[Geraldine]

I loved how smooth this flowed. I agree with Callie, there were spelling errors but other than that it's a good poem. :)

[Callie]

This is so simple yet so sweet. There are a few spelling errors such as the word strength you have written as strenght, but apart from that I really like this.

[Suditi]

I have strenght to stand the tides,
yet so weak to face my love,
My favorite lines!
And the last para! Wow! :D

[$êlvån]

tanx a lot......:)

[Shay]

this poem was really interesting and i love how you wrote it.