THE MILLION DOLLAR WORD "CRUSH"

With each chirping birds,
a new feeling for mate too chirps,
like a hustle in an old nest,
or a rain in a hot day,
each time it thrills the soul,
and everyday it fills the bowl...

Every next girl has a character,
to play in friend's chat,
and sometimes things seem beyond that,
but same does it end up in the very own chat...

Many a times she seems so special,
without whom the world is a vessel,
and her voice vibrate each neurons,
which often makes the world go round...

Was that a love,or just a crush,
was she the other half or just a rush??,
but lucky was i'm,
for i'm just a teen,,,

i would better keep my heart clean,
may be for the next girl,
and may be for her new thrills....

Reviews

[Sleeping Maiden]

Awww, i loved this. It was sweet and very honest. It's true. I like it. So direct! =)
Wonderful poem! Love can be so confusing at first.. but truely.. you will know it.. when it comes. Love is the most strongest feeling.. it's nothing like lust..
I enjoyed the read. thanks for sharing.

[Suditi]

True story!
Nice poem. :)

[$êlvån]

Tanx:)..it ws fun gng poem..:)

[Diwakar - "The Warrior ..]

rush and crush both are same. Love is beyond time yet captured inside it. this confusion is evident in teens..................................but love is supreme than any lust or thrust.....................................very nice thoughts.......loved reading