THE MILLION DOLLAR WORD "CRUSH"

With each chirping birds,
a new feeling for mate too chirps,
like a hustle in an old nest,
or a rain in a hot day,
each time it thrills the soul,
and everyday it fills the bowl...

Every next girl has a character,
to play in friend's chat,
and sometimes things seem beyond that,
but same does it end up in the very own chat...

Many a times she seems so special,
without whom the world is a vessel,
and her voice vibrate each neurons,
which often makes the world go round...

Was that a love,or just a crush,
was she the other half or just a rush??,
but lucky was i'm,
for i'm just a teen,,,

i would better keep my heart clean,
may be for the next girl,
and may be for her new thrills....

Reviews

[Sleeping Maiden]

Awww, i loved this. It was sweet and very honest. It's true. I like it. So direct! =)
Wonderful poem! Love can be so confusing at first.. but truely.. you will know it.. when it comes. Love is the most strongest feeling.. it's nothing like lust..
I enjoyed the read. thanks for sharing.

[Honey54]

I LOVE THIS...I think this sometimes when I feel myself falling too quickly...this is a sweet tender crush story...im glad i was able to unfold...

[Geraldine]

Ayayay! This is so cute. ^^ Nice job. :D

[Thea]

Love and crush, I admit that those two are quite confusing sometimes! But ok, love really lasts for a long time...This poem speaks so true...I like it!
:)))

[M]

It's a very cute program and I really like the imagery. :D

[Cassie Fraga]

lots of truth in here!!! I appreciate this write... thank you for sharing!!

[Monica]

this is a good poem...love, when it is true, is known without doubt or question.
I enjoyed it :)

[Callie]

I actually like reading your poetry, I see a lot in your work that reminds me of someone I used to know. This is beautiful and sweet and honest and just pretty great. Great work.

[xeroxcandybar]

Thanks for sharing, feel like im getting to know you with every read of your work.

[CourtneyShay]

awww love it very sweet and heartfelt

[Shay]

its so pure and love the overall message. the wording is so neat