stuck by reality

a bird flys fearlessly till it is shattered by reality....but it think infinite times to start flight next time...

Flying high i never measured my depth,

but when i feel apart,

those moments hurt me a lot,

which i spent endlessly,

waiting to reach my ground.....

Rain drops never constrained my fly,

but few tears were bit too heavy,

unable to move any further,

i compromised with my destiny,

and made a harsh move,

a move not to return,

a move not to go further,

but to quit my journey,

and quit my breath.....

I rejoiced for being so cheerfull,

and least i bothered for wings,

but its you,

and not my strength,

that made me dream,

that made me fly....

If ever you pass my way,

just give your minute glance,

would integrate my shattered wings,

and find a reason,

to grow in green,

and mature to stay,

and bloom in trees,

rather in flying in blue,

rather than flying in heights.....

Author's Note

it is a mid night empty minded poem.:)

Reviews

[Diwakar - "The Warrior ..]

Very nice......and love---ly poem, I love the stanza

Rain drops never constrained my fly,
but few tears were bit too heavy,
unable to move any further,
i compromised with my destiny,

It shows the ability to understand something ...... sacrificing for something more important that life.......................Very beautifully crafted :-)

[Honey54]

SWEET..AND BEAUTIFUL..NICE POEM :)

[DeliriousCerises]

Even if it was an empty minded poem, it's done so well that it can be interpreted with depth. The bird being people, When we are over powered by our sorrows, when we've been so hurt by failure that we fear it and give up, when we feel powerless, and in a way, the choice to give up gives us a sense of freedom, freedom to be happy with our failures. However, we can be inspired again, perhaps by love, or substance, or whatever, on a new path. I'm not sure if that's what you were thinking, but I love how this can inspire thought within myself. Very well done.

[Amila Jay]

Wow. This is very nice. Wonderful write :))

[Ink Angel]

A very creative write, I love the last stanza, actually I cant decided there all brilliant. Its beautiful. Thank you

[Shay]

its so interesting i like it alot

[Crystal Marie Dreier]

This was beautiful!

[Monica]

This is a beautiful poem and well written! I love how you have expressed emotions with such depth :)

[Cassie Fraga]

very creative.... LOVE the open ending!! you express well here... very nice write indeed!!

[Thea]

Your emotions flowed here flawlessly...A beautiful piece...
:)))

[Pax]

this is really nice but the color hurts my eye..