MY MOM

This is for my mom. Right now I am away from her and doing my graduation.This is my first one for my own creator.Miss you a lot.

She made my imperfect life,

a thing of perfection.

She wiped my tears,

before they crossed my eyes.

She woke whole night,

trying to make me sleep.

She remained worried,

to make me feel rejoiced.

She reduced her comfort,

to make me feel easy.

I ignored her warm kisses,

for they made my cheeks wet,

but today my soul has dried,

and I wish she was there.

I miss her shouts,

when I slept for long,

for now I lay dead,

and there is whole lot of silence.

She had the magic,

to make me smile,

for today I paid for it,

but my lips remained unmoved.

The moon used to be my enemy,

as told by mom,

to make eat,

fast;when I was five,

and today I gaze,

but it remained a white spot.

oh! It was she who filled,

very life in my life,

and I was wrong,

who thought it otherwise. 

Author's Note

This is for my mom.hope you like.

Reviews

[Queen Empress]

Beautiful..Missing my mom right now..

[Suditi]

I ignored her warm kisses,
for they made my cheeks wet,
but today my soul has dried,
and I wish she was there.

Such a beautiful verse. Such a beautiful poem. So heart touching.

[$êlvån]

thanks:)...........

[TL Boehm]

wonderfully penned tribute to your mom. Thank you for sharing it - I hope you also shared it with her.

[Manpreet]

Beautiful and great write!

[Shay]

aww so sweet you wrote it for your mom. It is so wonderful how you show how much you care for her in it and it was enjoying to read.

[reflectingus]

This is well written, a rather sincere tribute to your mother. Sometimes we fail to understand the importance of our loved ones as we get accustomed to their daily presence, but it is when we miss them, we realize how much they have meant for us, all along. Great job, it was pleasant to read.

[$êlvån]

tanx a million...:)

[CHRIS ANDES]

yeah, we can appreciate the importance of someone
in her absence
=]

[Draven]

This poem touches the deepest part of my heart because I once had what you have. But when my Dad left her, she became abusive and violent.

[Pax]

very nice expressions and tribute to all the mothers out there..
and to the their children's who missed they're parents.

[Leslie Philibert]

A very honourabe tribute to your mother, as so often, good poetry from Indian