Blind

Ignore the cliche. ;) Again, a restore.

They say,

Love is blind

when it defies

all the lines

you drew to remind

your heart

to agree

with your mind.

 

But I say,

Love is blind

when you see

things in me

that lead you

to believe

that I am wrong

where once--

 

I was right.

 

Baby,

It's not me

that's broken--

it's your sight.

 

Reviews

[Imperfection]

This is great.

Short and not-so-sweet.

Hits the point straightaway.

Brilliant write.

[Haden]

Hoo-Yahh!! well spoken! it's a fantastic "i am woman hear my roar" write! when you figure out how to evoca these let me know - i love your rhythm!! do you perform? you should perform this! your strength would certainly bring the house down. great Trisha

[Barry S. Maltese]

yes, it is cliche, but there are times when that is justified - just like here, and now. I especially loved the ending.
"baby
its not me
(thats broken)
its your sight"
Yes, but sometimes Love is Blind because they refuse to see!

[JlB]

Yeah I like the witty part of this too.

Very good, I like picture too I was staring at brail tryingto figure it out before I read the poem.
This is smart and clever, I like it alot. I hope it's speaking volumes about you too.

Jb

[Kara Emily Krantz]

yessssssssssssssssssss

yes

yes

yes

this is witty and catty and true and delicious.

yay :)