Granted

Granted

A Poem by Dark Angel

Taken for granted once again
lied to for the millionth time
is the game ever gonna end?
pain is brought to the surface and hidden by a mask

Wanting to speak out and cry but will feel ashamed 
to stay strong is to hold everything in and not letting it out 
no guy would be there for comfort
a shoulder to cry on is out of the question as well

Punch a wall 
Scream in the wind
Run away for miles
Solutions are endless and constant

Depression creeps in and stays
loneliness hurts and saddens the heart
just to become who once was is best
It's the only way not to get hurt is for the black wolf to take over completely

© 2012 Dark Angel


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You have put so much into this poem- both spoken, and unspoken. The emotion is captivating and relatable. I understand these feelings all too well, and hope that you can find a brighter patch of light among whatever it is you're experiencing right now. If not well, it makes for very good poetry- how about that for a silver lining. :)

Keep up the good work

Posted 12 Years Ago


I'm sorry that you're going through this! No the game, or also known as life, will never end with the lying and portrayal. Life is messed up and sucks the majority of the time. I know how it feels to be forgranted and lied to. I think everyone on this webstie most definitely can relate to this too! I hate that people has to experience such misery, including myself. Depression erupts and takes over the person's life and they stay lonely for it seems forever. A very nice and penned poem! :)

"no guy would be there for comfort
a shoulder to cry on is out of the question as well"
---I really like those two lines since that seems like something I would've said or wrote down for a possible poem. :D

"loneliness hurts and saddens the heart"
-- that's no lie! The heart gets effected by every situation that a human processes through. Being lonely does hurt and we all need someone there to comfort and hold us at certain peaks in our lives.

Ashley Rivers--Dream BIG and you'll win BIG ;)

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Dark Angel
Dark Angel

statesville, NC



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I'm nothing special, i am a lover also a fighter, i am a witch something no one really believes in anymore but i tell the truth, i am faithful and loyal, trustworthy, but will say i have my days when .. more..

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A Poem by Dark Angel