Goodbye Happiness

After a long time of happiness came a dark cloud 

of misery and pain,

Soul on fire and demons cry,

Dying inside with so much sorrow,

tears fall as a waterfall over the edge of a cliff with no ending,

Sleep is impossible to get when you left me alone,

I don't understand why,

what have I done wrong?

either way you broke my heart,

So now i die alone and in sadness curled in a ball in a corner,

Thank you,

 You were everything to me,

and you tossed me aside like i was nothing,

so now darkness fills my heart and controls my soul,

how does that make you feel to know that you made this

 happen to someone who actually loved you?

Reviews

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

Bravo, you just explained how I've felt lately about my ex boyfriend Daniel! Wow, this really captured feelings that I was unable to grasp and write about. I know how you feel. I kept asking myself "What have I done wrong?" But the truth is you didn't, they were too stupid to let go of you! That's what my daddy told me anyway! :3 I think the worst feeling to ever go through in this world is to have your heart broken and shattered into a million pieces. Anyway, I love this and I totally relate! Keep writing! :D

Ashley Rivers-- your friend ;)

[Adam M. Snow]

Such tragic in such a good poem... I like it