Is it bad
A Poem by Rivaxorus
Is it bad that,
I'm drowning
© 2015 Rivaxorus
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Is it worse that it's raining?
Posted 9 Years Ago
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Unless it's in happiness, very hard to surface.
Or food.
If not, hang in there.
Two short statements holding all the answers in it.
Posted 9 Years Ago
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Yes. The worst way to die. Maybe fire is worst? I hope all is going well. Best to do a Dog paddle if swimming is weak.
Coyote
Posted 9 Years Ago
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It depends.
Are you drowning in a pool, or are you drowning in the sea?
Posted 9 Years Ago
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A clear statement that needs no answer.
Posted 9 Years Ago
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Sometimes it's the short poems that really pack a punch. I like how this one leaves the reader wondering. Nice work and keep writing!!
Posted 9 Years Ago
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Added on February 2, 2015
Last Updated on February 2, 2015
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RivaxorusApple Valley, CA
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Hello there my name is Abby Lawless, although I do prefer the nickname Rivaxorus. I'm Seventeen years old and live in California. I love writing, I'm hoping to make a career and live off of working wi.. more..
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