Is it bad

Is it bad

A Poem by Rivaxorus

Is it bad that,
I'm drowning

© 2015 Rivaxorus


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Is it worse that it's raining?

Posted 9 Years Ago


Unless it's in happiness, very hard to surface.
Or food.
If not, hang in there.
Two short statements holding all the answers in it.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Yes. The worst way to die. Maybe fire is worst? I hope all is going well. Best to do a Dog paddle if swimming is weak.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


It depends.

Are you drowning in a pool, or are you drowning in the sea?

Posted 9 Years Ago


A clear statement that needs no answer.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Sometimes it's the short poems that really pack a punch. I like how this one leaves the reader wondering. Nice work and keep writing!!

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Added on February 2, 2015
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Rivaxorus
Rivaxorus

Apple Valley, CA



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Hello there my name is Abby Lawless, although I do prefer the nickname Rivaxorus. I'm Seventeen years old and live in California. I love writing, I'm hoping to make a career and live off of working wi.. more..

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