Is it bad
A Poem by
Rivaxorus
Is it bad that,
I'm drowning
© 2015 Rivaxorus
Author's Note
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Reviews
Is it worse that it's raining?
Posted 9 Years Ago
Unless it's in happiness, very hard to surface.
Or food.
If not, hang in there.
Two short statements holding all the answers in it.
Posted 9 Years Ago
Unless it's in happiness, very hard to surface.
Or food.
If not, hang in there.
Two short statements holding all the answers in it.
Yes. The worst way to die. Maybe fire is worst? I hope all is going well. Best to do a Dog paddle if swimming is weak.
Coyote
Posted 9 Years Ago
Yes. The worst way to die. Maybe fire is worst? I hope all is going well. Best to do a Dog paddle if swimming is weak.
Coyote
It depends.
Are you drowning in a pool, or are you drowning in the sea?
Posted 9 Years Ago
It depends.
Are you drowning in a pool, or are you drowning in the sea?
A clear statement that needs no answer.
Posted 9 Years Ago
A clear statement that needs no answer.
Sometimes it's the short poems that really pack a punch. I like how this one leaves the reader wondering. Nice work and keep writing!!
Posted 9 Years Ago
Sometimes it's the short poems that really pack a punch. I like how this one leaves the reader wondering. Nice work and keep writing!!
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Added on February 2, 2015
Last Updated on February 2, 2015
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Rivaxorus Apple Valley, CA
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Hello there my name is Abby Lawless, although I do prefer the nickname Rivaxorus. I'm Seventeen years old and live in California. I love writing, I'm hoping to make a career and live off of working wi..
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