Right

Right

A Poem by Rivaxorus

I'm scared of living,
but I'm terrified of dying. 
So what then.

You can't tell me it gets better,
it only gets worse.

© 2015 Rivaxorus


Author's Note

Rivaxorus
The world is corrupt, no one cares anymore, and while we have information at our fingertips whose to say it's true or false?

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Reminds me of General Slim's account of Burma when a Chinese office found one of his men taking drugs. The man cried our in terror as he realised his officer was about to kill him. The officer shot the man dead, and as he replaced his pistol remark with a grim smile:

'Strange, Afraid to live, afraid to die!'


Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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A interesting question here. We will know one day. The final walk will teach us the truth. I like the poetry that asked questions. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


I remember the now-going saying I have with my friend, "It can always get worse under any circumstance."
It's now given me quite an inspiration to write something of such content.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Reminds me of General Slim's account of Burma when a Chinese office found one of his men taking drugs. The man cried our in terror as he realised his officer was about to kill him. The officer shot the man dead, and as he replaced his pistol remark with a grim smile:

'Strange, Afraid to live, afraid to die!'


Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Better or worse are in the eye of the beholder, and the one who lives the Life determines its ultimate success, as well as defines it. A short piece of deep thought here.

Posted 9 Years Ago


One must find those little things we leave out, not hat one puts in, well done, good read.

Posted 9 Years Ago


then, if it gets better, it's a delightful surprise, let's go for the status quo, I know how things can get worse, one way, I could put on 25-30 pounds or more. That would depress me a lot.

Posted 9 Years Ago


A powerful write. Thought provoking...:)................

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Rivaxorus
Rivaxorus

Apple Valley, CA



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Hello there my name is Abby Lawless, although I do prefer the nickname Rivaxorus. I'm Seventeen years old and live in California. I love writing, I'm hoping to make a career and live off of working wi.. more..

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