One two three do you see what I see

Do you ever mess up

and all you can say is sorry

there's no fixing mistakes

they fill your head with lies

They say humans are made to make mistakes

but how long is that true until it becomes a problem

A endless hole that they can't crawl out of

being sorry isn't enough

No matter how much they change

how much they beg, and cry

it only makes it worse

so where does that leave them?

one two three, do you see what I see

no

you don't

because you have your own things to worry about

Sometimes, there just isn't anyone who cares

and you can't make them care

just move on

there's nothing else to do

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Great wisdom in your words.
"just move on
there's nothing else to do"
We must apology and not try to repeat the mistakes. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[William heath]

It sounds like you said what was on your mind. I loved it.
That is all.

[rndarly23]

hey I know the feeling...that's why we are here...on writer'scafe.org :) at least you can write about it. i like the " one two three" it 's cool. keep writing. :)

[KeeD]

I see potential to learn from a mistake but I also see the concept of making one two three many a mistake to the point of moving on.. Hey your poem kinda teaches us something.. A message, pretty cool!

[Laura Lynn]

Abby Lawless, how did you get it in this shape? nice eying it,

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A very solid piece that has epic description, well done, good read.