Curious Creature

Curious Creature

A Poem by Rivaxorus
"

come to the light

"

Curious creature look at the sun
What do you see in those godly eyes of yours
The lives of little ants running around
What do you think of them curious little creature

You can control the universe
the sun the moon
the waves and sky
yet you sit there trying to understand them

Understand the birth, the death of all things
humans, animals, curious little dangers
but if you had one chance
would you reset the world

curious little creature
please don't take the world away

© 2014 Rivaxorus


Author's Note

Rivaxorus
I wrote a different poem this time since my last one as a bit.... dark? I guess this one is lighter xD

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Your last one was amazing. There's no argument.

I really liked, "But if you had one chance....would you reset the world..".

I would. I really would.

Posted 10 Years Ago


I like the contemplation behind this. The story and all, it's amazing.
Well played. ^^

Posted 10 Years Ago


This is interesting and cute... and yes it is lighter then the direction you could have taken :)
-QuanaWana

Posted 10 Years Ago


This was a very interesting piece. I like scheme of this piece and just the thought behind it. I feel like as humans we always want to change something, but if we were given the chance would really want to change what we have? Just a thought, well done it was a good write.

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Rivaxorus
Rivaxorus

Apple Valley, CA



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Hello there my name is Abby Lawless, although I do prefer the nickname Rivaxorus. I'm Seventeen years old and live in California. I love writing, I'm hoping to make a career and live off of working wi.. more..

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