no one can talk

no one can talk

A Poem by Rivaxorus
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There were three intensifying the silence,
two watching the side lines.
Joker in the back,
Making a deal with the devil.

But isn't this a peculiar scene.
Demons and men are all the same,
Greedy impaired to themselves
It's difficult to tell them apart.

No one can talk,
We all of some sense of it.
Sense of the dark,
Or pure light

It's too late got one gone,
And another coming
Find yourself again
And think different

You know.

© 2014 Rivaxorus


Author's Note

Rivaxorus
Bla not very good but trying to beat writers block so enjoy the horrible poem ^w^

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I like the logic of this poem.
"There were three intensifying the silence,
two watching the side lines.
Joker in the back,
Making a deal with the devil. "
The above lines are real poetry. You did very well with the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 10 Years Ago


"No one can talk,
We all of some sense of it.
Sense of the dark,
Or pure light "

You are shining more and every day with those new writes. I look forward to reading more...:)...............


Posted 10 Years Ago



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Rivaxorus
Rivaxorus

Apple Valley, CA



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Hello there my name is Abby Lawless, although I do prefer the nickname Rivaxorus. I'm Seventeen years old and live in California. I love writing, I'm hoping to make a career and live off of working wi.. more..

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