Prologue

Prologue

A Chapter by Rivaxorus
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I want to go to Canada

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I can't really remember what I was doing, or how I got here, just that I was lying with my back to the ground in the snow. On all sides of me, were piles of white, cold, ice crystals. I felt like I was freezing, but I didn't care. Pulling my hands to my sides as my dark hair fell over my violet eyes. My cheeks bright red, when the light was blocked by an object. A hand it seemed, a teenagers hand, bigger than my small eight year old hands. As I reached out and touched it, that teenager pulled me up into a standing position, though I couldn't see what he looked like. All he was, was a blurry figure. My face flushed in embarrassment as he kissed the top of my head and whispered the words.


"Aishiteru"



© 2013 Rivaxorus


Author's Note

Rivaxorus
Prologue of the story Aishiteru, this is more of a flashback scene for the main character. If you do not like Gay/lesbian relationships don't read, and don't leave hateful comments.

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This is really, really sweet and quite intriguing, I definitely want to read more! I've just joined and uploaded my first chapter which has a lot of gay/lesbian themes so I'm delighted to see a nice representation here. Keep writing!

Posted 12 Years Ago


I really like this. The imagery is very good and I was able to easily picture the scene while I read it. Good job, I can't wait to read the rest.
I like the first person in the moment way that this was written. It's different than normal flashbacks.

Posted 12 Years Ago


A magical write. It is so nice ...I really enjoyed the suspense in it too...:)

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Rivaxorus
Rivaxorus

Apple Valley, CA



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Hello there my name is Abby Lawless, although I do prefer the nickname Rivaxorus. I'm Seventeen years old and live in California. I love writing, I'm hoping to make a career and live off of working wi.. more..

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