I was once a rat

I was once a rat

A Poem by Rivaxorus

I was once a rat
Running among the flowers
Taking only what I needed
Seeking nothing else

I was once a mouse
Eating all the wheat
Causing the farmers trouble
Hunted by cats

I was once a cat
Hunting the mice
Making a living
All on my own

I was once a dog
Obeying my masters orders
Getting in trouble
Then put to sleep

I was once a bird
Wild and free
But they took me away
And threw me away

I was once a field
Growing tall and strong
Until you cut me down
To earn money

I was once a forest
A home for animals
Until you cut me down
And built your home

I was once a lake
Filled with fish
Until you poisoned me
Now all is dead

I was once human
Sucking the lake dry
Cutting down the forests
Now look where I am

I was only once, a kind and gentle rat

© 2013 Rivaxorus


Author's Note

Rivaxorus
I was only once, a king and gentle rat

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Profound. Good write.
~pat

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Haha, this was a good write. It's unique for sure.

Posted 11 Years Ago


This is a good analogy, well written. We certainly are intertwined with all of the other creatures, and we have such a tremendous impact! Good job.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Hey this is really good, like alot

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A unique poem to say the least ...:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Good poem, keep on penning.
~Res

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Rivaxorus
Rivaxorus

Apple Valley, CA



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Hello there my name is Abby Lawless, although I do prefer the nickname Rivaxorus. I'm Seventeen years old and live in California. I love writing, I'm hoping to make a career and live off of working wi.. more..

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