Betrayal knows me

Betrayal knows me,

I am not his good friend,

I shoot at it daggers,

I like to play the fiend.

It would beseech me,

It would play hard,

To make me take that one step,

That I would forever regret.

Betrayal knows me,

I am not his good friend,

I'd trap it in a noose,

I would hang it to death.

It would look at me,

With eyes filled with tears,

Make me think a little,

Who am I to be the killer?

But Betrayal knows me,

I am not his good friend,

No, I cannot let go,

I just don’t like ends.

Reviews

[Ryker Killian]

Betrayal Know You,
and of course it does,
your an incredible writer

[.]

Very rhymatic write. I enjoyed this write. perfect flow

[Crow]

Very nicely written; this piece is well metered, and flows masterfully. I feel the verbal imagery describes human nature quite well.