My Life and Me

I laugh at life, and it stares back at me,
As if a smile went out of its domain,
Then I remember, Oh now I recall,
Tears drop out of my eyes,
My lips discard what they had gained,
A smile, it was!

We move on, My life and me,
There are people we meet,
and The situations they create,
Some it loves, the ones I hate,
Here we struggle, my Life and me,
To keep hold of each other,
I let go, accept defeat.


I have to, like a puppet on a string,
A flying kite, not a bird with wings,
Elate forcibly, unamused,
Cry and plaint, when I don't want to,
Still live on, get on with life,
giving up ain't my pride.

The blazing fire in my heart, makes me steal,
Love and comfort, from my life's treasury,
Then one fine day, there it is,
The turning of the corners of its lips.
Oh!It took a long while,
My life's capturing of a smile.
A revelation it is, for My life and me,
From around the corner, i can see,
As happiness, into my life, peeps! 

Reviews

[Hello, Goodbye]

I don't have much criticism or even positive reinforcement for that matter.. but what I do have is an unlimited amount of empathy. I feel the words you have written and understand the pain. Im glad to see much honesty here, and commend the candor that you have opened your work to..

[Matthews Reggie]

they is a total feel of a call for sympathy... brilliant work... nicely written..

[Jessica]

ONE WORD..........................GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Keep the good work up!

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...I have to, like a puppet on a string,
A flying kite, not a bird with wings,

Wow! These are such amazing lines here. I enjoyed the emotion.
This is powerful and so well expressed...