Lost On a One Way Path

Lost On a One Way Path

A Story by SeemsPoetic
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This is a one line story.

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He stopped in his tracks as he realized how truly lost he was on this one-way path to destiny.

© 2017 SeemsPoetic


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This poem seemed so unassuming but the beauty of it is that it so accurately describes a real life phenomenon. I have often found myself lost, even though I really only have one way to go.

So much power. Your use of such a heavy font beautifully complements your message.

Truly exceptional!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Rye
Such a wonderful write here said in just a few words.

Posted 6 Years Ago
Succinct portrait of an ah-ha moment.
Congratulations on placing first in the contest.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This poem seemed so unassuming but the beauty of it is that it so accurately describes a real life phenomenon. I have often found myself lost, even though I really only have one way to go.

So much power. Your use of such a heavy font beautifully complements your message.

Truly exceptional!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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 Added on May 12, 2017
Last Updated on May 12, 2017
Tags: identity crisis, lost, path, destiny, road, second guessing, lonely, life, fate

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SeemsPoetic
SeemsPoetic

Green Bay, WI



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Self taught artist. I write free verse and spoken word poetry. 20 years old. more..

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