एहसास...

An instant stuff...expressing some random feelings...

Chalne ko tha bss karwaa chord k apna..

socha ki tughse milta chalu...

Rukk gya vhi..

Socha tu aa jayegi yhi...

Mai galt tha...

Mai fir se galt tha...

Aadat ho gyi thi u bhaagne ki meri...

Akela chord kr aage bardh janee ki meri...

Bahut kimmat chuka...chuka tha mai....ab nhi badhna chahta tha....

U akela...anjaani manjil ki orr...

Ek sath chahiye tha tera...aae humsufar uss begaani manjil ki orr...

Uss kaarwe pe aaj bhi kharda raahhh tkk rha hu teri...

Na tughh tk aane ki himmat hai ...

Na aage bardh jane ki takktt...

Ummr bhar bhi kharda rhna pade to afsoos na hoga...

Hoga to gum tb ...jb tu kisi aur k sath aage bardh chuka hoga...

Author's Note

Welcome for positive criticism, and I wish my friends to go on feelings..not on words !!

Reviews

[Abhishek Asthana]

feelings are always random, no worries if you havenot delivered plenty of time in writing any stuff,, its not the sentence of dealth which will demand a huge span of time for proceedings,, hahaha

well, about the poem you have written it beautifully, very devoted and sad one, good work buddy !! keep writing :)

[Ayush Mishra]

hahaha...thanx :)

[APOORVA]

waah, bahot khoobsurat!!
very well encrypted

[Jessica Lima]

I wish I could understand, but its not a language I have learned yet. However, the arrangement is intriguing and I'm fond of using [...] quite a lot myself.

[Surya]

Never on words, and I totally liked it....
Heart speaks better than words....
I love those writes which I feel as such and I felt your's so....I loved it....:)

[Ayush Mishra]

Thnx Surya...well these are feelings than some worthless words... :)

[Najam Us Saher]

Waah....so deep and thoughtful. Last lines were very heart touching. I truly liked it.

[Ayush Mishra]

Thanx Najam.. :)
all lines were actually instantly written...describing a specific scenario...

[Najam Us Saher]

Oh okay.....You're welcome.