Hey You

This is just a random poem coming from the heart

Hey you, you stole my heart

You took it away and never returned

You never wanted me

Just wanted me to hurt

Writher in pain

Silence my cries

Without my heart, I feel nothing

I am nothing, without my heart

How can I get it back, if I don't miss it?

Somewhere deep inside, I'll always remember my heart

That's why I'll truly gain those emotions back 

Reviews

[Wildecat]

Short sweet and too the point, nice write.

[Samantha Ashley*]

I like this poem, Good Job!

[Kevin]

Simple and straight forward. Well done. If I have a nit pick it's the word choices of the last line. They seem to break the flow you had going. Not sure how else to put it. Still well done.