Empty Spaces

There’s nothing really to type
As I’m looking at this blank page
Trying to find just the right words
To fill up the empty spaces
But all the ideas that flood my mind
Have already been expressed in words
Or are way to deep to express at all
Like the forever present wounds on my heart
On my flesh
From all the lies, all the guys
I’m jealous of everyone
Yet wishing no one to the life I have
So many secrets hidden behind just two plain eyes
So many stories that I can tell
Yet chose not to because of what they are
Or who they concern
I’m not even sure of what this is
Or if it really means anything to you
But I’m finding the words to fill the book
Chapter by chapter,
Page by page
And pretty soon I’ll have it published
For all the world’s eyes to see
What life is like for an outcast living in the world
And yet, no one knows she’s an outcast
She hides it so well behind the mask
The fake smile put on for all the friends
So that no one would worry
That her world is falling apart
Piece by piece
And little by little, they slip away
She sings her song in silence
Wishing that someone would sing along
But no one will ever hear her pleading
So there is nothing to do but continue on
Until her day will come
And her angel will set her free
From this world that’s dying before her

Reviews

[((Teenage_Poet_Loser))]

I love the style you have here, the sad and sombre feeling. It was a little hard on the eye with the long piece, you could have devided it into 3 paragraphs? but only my opinion :) Well done!*

[just is]

Wow, I totally love this write, This is wonderful.

[Distant horizons]

Phew, Wonderfully written. heartfelt, restrained, imaginative, introspective words, that more than fill the page. Excellent.