Hermosa

Hermosa

A Poem by SebastianBarker
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Again, this is just my impromptu poetry. I feel the more I do, the better I'll get. Critique if you want. Appreciate all who read it.

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I squeeze tightly when our hands entwine.
but her hand remains loose.

I try to remember the times we were happy.
Before the introduction of this noose.

Now I have nothing, she's gone without notice.
Waiting for someone to care, maybe even notice.

© 2015 SebastianBarker


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SebastianBarker
If it flows well, I'm improving.

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Added on March 5, 2015
Last Updated on March 5, 2015
Tags: poem, poetry, love, relationships, heart, hearthbreak, romance, break up, sad, smile, giants, words, noose, end, notice, hello, care, someone

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SebastianBarker
SebastianBarker

Coventry, West Midlands, United Kingdom



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I am an aspiring poet. Maybe aspiring writer as well. Maybe an aspiring unemployed person who wants to be a writer. Maybe I am just. more..

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A Poem by SebastianBarker