Gingerale Whiskey

no disclaimers

gingerale whiskey
anti social
anti poetic

anti the time it takes to

connect ideas with correct grammar

i'm not trying to impress you.

green day, really?

skipping tracks, really?

rebar, really?

salvage me from this isolated pit of mediocrity

transparency

bad writing

i'm young, just forgive me

I may not be saying much

but these self loathing thoughts

have been congesting my mental passage ways

creating solid creative block

and I have to express this

momentarily before i can

open up the space

where my thoughts can

frolic jovially

and dance enraged

where they can transform a blank stage

and a performer

into the vivid hues

that have been long untapped

where emotion and intellect meet

Reviews

[MoriartyMesa]

OMG,
I loved this, the flow, the words, everything about this was just as good as gold if not better.