Big Words For Infatuation

The sweet panacea stroking my inner throat,

Intruding my core,

Lilts me to my left--

Lilts me to disconsonance.

A tintinnabulation of maracas and calabanzas

Beguiles me right,

Past my zenith,

And into a demigod.

A gondolier

Of Byzantine intricacies,

Who is as extemporaneous

As the seagoat.

And I begin dancing

Cascading to my emotions

And feeling cured;

Enveloped in the arms of this...

Demigod.

Reviews

[Mr. Darkblood]

sorry dude, but I didn't really like this.
to me, the giant words distract from the deeper meaning of this. I understand that you are in love with someone and their presence makes you esctatic, but how do they make you feel esctatic? I'm sure I'd know if I had a dictionary near me, but since I don't, I don't understand.

it's good to have a good vocabulary, but you definitely take this to an extreme.