PEACE NOT WAR

As peace strikes, shut up
and don't mess for this li'l fist
might land on your face!

Reviews

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

It gives a clear message.

[Seanne Tholltree]

thank u vicky..

[Lindsay T]

Clever and funny. I love short and sweet poems like this, bravo :) Keep it up.

[Seanne Tholltree]

thanks :>

[Amata Luna]

Ouch. I can just feel the threatening heat of the battle. =D Maybe with peace we need not use our fists. ;)

[Leslie Philibert]

Clever piece of writing, a short poem with a big message, lots of wry, ironical
humour here, nice one.

[CHRIS ANDES]

...high temper ruins a day
=]

[Coyote Poetry]

Would be nice if a peace strike would effect this world. Gandhi logic may not work today. Wealthy men control the complete world. I like the desire of the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Gene Hiccup]

haha...this is cute! its amusing to read poems that are just short but does have a great meaning...keep it up..im willing to read more from you...