MERE XV

3rd sequel of mere x

This is enough! You have to stop your craziness towards her permanently!

Can't you see, or are you pretending not to see that you're just an ordinary person to her?

Nothing more, nothing less.

No matter how hard you try to impress her, you're still invisible.

Even though you already talked, threw jokes and exchanged messages, doesn't mean you've elevated in her priority list.

Who knows maybe after your talking and all, you're forgotten?

So please I beg you for the nth time don't put her on top of your coolest people!

If she also care and if she also wanted you to be her friend, don't force it to happen now,

Instead let her perfectly show it to you.

Because it's nicer to let the fruit ripen on its tree than to harvest it then incubate to forcedly ripen.

Thank you, I'll try to let my thoughts subside, temporarily, I'm afraid I can't do it permanently for now.

Let's give a another chance and if things still ain't working,

Promise I'll merely STOP.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

"Because it's nicer to let the fruit ripen on its tree than to harvest it then incubate to forcedly ripen."
I like the wisdom in your words. The above statement is true. Better to go slow and easy and hope for a very good ending. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Seanne Tholltree]

thank you also for the reviews...

[CHRIS ANDES]

intense feelings with such intense words
..you've created the emotion all along the poem
this great seanne
=]

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

a painful write that relates to all us readers, well done, good read.

[Amata Luna]

Merely stop. Ouch. I can relate well to this poem of yours very well. NOW. Really you have to wait with some people and sometimes, even if you have done everything things look like it's so impossible to come by. Invisible as you said. I so much feel for you. Although I can also see the persistent side and the good it does to one person like you. My many thanks for sharing this one. You have once again enlightened a soul. :) Great job.