MERE XIV

Seven years ago when we separated ways, since I have to study in other school.

It was really a hard thing to be away with you, best friend.

I miss the fun, the excitement; and even the disasters we bring when were together.

Two years later you visited our school to compete in badminton,

We were shocked when we saw each other, but I can feel

That your care and the best-friend-air are not there.

I also felt that you were pestered by me bugging you,

And you intentionally lose the game so that you'll not go back the next day.

It was the last time that we saw each other since you eventually evaded me.

From that day on I decided to forget you, but there are instances

Like when you visited me in a dream, the feelings I once had for you came back.

I admit that my heart still merely beats for you, ‘tor’ even if you tore it apart.

I hope that you already realize that the one who loves you dearly

Is the one you've denied before and when we met you‘ll say ‘I love you too’.

 

Author's Note

true love?

Reviews

[natzky]

whoa...really sweet..heheh..."the only way to know if someone truly loves you is when after you've turn him down, you'll see him rise from the fall saying "i love you too"...gorogo nhe....muahhh

[Amata Luna]

This series of poem from you has really enthralled me. Like a story. There's always something new and each time I read your words, you bring me in that very place to understand what you're going through. Another great piece. Well done.

[Coyote Poetry]

Hard when people change. We desire friendship and for some reason it cannot be. I like the story and the ending. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote