WITHIN 3

I'm slightly annoyed with
your hypocrisy, your pride and
vanity seems to eat
your whole character.
what's happening to you?

Reviews

[AK]

Very nice! Great expression of emotions!

[jennifer little]

wonderful poem great job keep up the good work thanks for sharring this with me

[Genevive]

short, simple, and honest writing--good job!

[Coyote Poetry]

Direct and honest words. Sometime need to be heard and spoken to another. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[CHRIS ANDES]

you're just too emotional to face reality
=]

[Amata Luna]

Whoa, it feels like emotions got into the deep. I'm pretty intrigued with these three poems of yours. Nice writing. Good pieces of work. It's what my teacher tells me before: meaty though short.