MERE X

a supressed wish

Here you go again thinking of her.
Will you stop it please!
You're not making any sense.
You don't even know if she's also thinking the same way!
So please don't bother think of her like that, 'cause you look like fool.
Don't resurrect Petrarch in this generation.

Yes I know but I just can't help it.
She lingers in mind every now and then.
Even in my dreams she exists.
I don't wanna call it obsession though.
And I know for a fact that I'm not even worth her time, but I still do care about her.
I know and you know that I'm not a lesbian.
Because I'm a 95% lady and still a 5% kid who just
Merely wanted to have a friend and a sister in her persona.

Reviews

[lady france]

it somewhat contradicts your your self titled essay "seanne"

anyway, if she also wants you to be her friend, she'll make a way.

but for sure you're also running in her mind as psychologist say!

[Kat Sayers]

What a wish. It brings me to say I hope all comes into your reach and that you may be blessed with wishes that do come true.

[CHRIS ANDES]

thinking of somebody doesn't always means affection
=]

[lady france]

i agree with natzky,,and i can somewhat relate since i'm the only child,, i somehow wanted a sister..

[natzky]

...I think she's thinking about you too...
i love this line.." don't resurrect Petrarch in this generation"...double like..:)

[Seanne Tholltree]

thanks for all your reviews....

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

I like the different voices in this with feeling behind each.

[Alex Vidmar]

really nice

[jennifer little]

nice work great job keep up the awsome work thanks for sharing this with me

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

The flow is perfect, it reminds me of some of the older poetry, back in the day when poets were masters, well done, good read.