MERE IX

I was in the middle of laughing
When I gazed at you studying alone
All the way to the basement.
I was shocked when I saw
Solving a math problem in
The air with sweat incessantly
Trickling that almost fogged your eyeglass.
A glimpse of smile unconsciously flashed on
My lips when I saw you open another pack
Of ink refill. You inspired me though
We don't know each other.
I hope someday I'll be beside
You merely calculating a math problem too.

Reviews

[Amata Luna]

Wow, this is a simple scene that I just found cute and sweet. Where in that moment you meet one's eyes and time just seem suspended. Thank you for sharing this one. ;)

[CHRIS ANDES]

that's real cute
=]
...nicely made

[natzky]

really great...such a gifted writer..keep on writing..:)

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

I like this, especially this part:
"A glimpse of smile unconsciously flashed on
My lips when I saw you open another pack
Of ink refill. You inspired me though
We don't know each other.
I hope someday I'll be beside
You merely calculating a math problem too. "

[Alex Vidmar]

i like it

[jennifer little]

great job keep up the good work i loved reading thanks for sharing this with me

[Coyote Poetry]

I like how you made solving a math problem something important. I like the thoughts and the ending to the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Simple, short and to the point, well done, good read.