MERE VII

7th sonnet

Lately I noticed that you were blown cold

Whenever I’m around. What’s wrong with you?

You’re such a blivit!

Do you think you’re the ace in the hole?

The key figure? Oh dear me! Not a chance!

Do you think I’m impressed

By your silly sucking acts?

Better go and chase yourself.

And sometimes you play dicty and frozen

Just to gripe my soul! Well you look

Like a cornball, a moonshine

And a bottom out Mickey mouse!

I think I already hit the ceiling

And get frosted because you’re merely a hamburger to me!

 

 

Author's Note

sorry for the words...i formulate this poem when i'm georging at mrs.murphy...hehe

Reviews

[lady france]

combination of strong emotions...well written love it...

[Gene Hiccup]

this poem reflects your personality deedee, its full of child-like innocence!!!
continue writing good poems!!

[CHRIS ANDES]

I love your words,
...it's so perfect to be fitted unto your feelings!!

[natzky]

heheh'...this poem is really great' are you angry seanne??I'm a little bit curious with the person whom you talking about.....

[paparapapa]

Haha. I loved this. Shows your emotions perfectly but at the same time, it has a funny twist to it. :)) Great job! :P

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

Nice feeling, seems of anger or hate. I like it.