MERE VI

my 6th sonnet

It seems like yesterday when
We were still holding hands,
Sharing laughter that almost
Caught the teacher's attention,
Our crazy pranks and the
Back scratches during quizzes.
Those were the memories that is
Hard to forget.
But now it was replaced by
Blank glances seems that nothing happens
I really don't know what set us apart,
Who cut the rope between us.
All I know is that I merely miss you
My first tertiary friend!

Author's Note

sorry for the errors in grammar,,just wrote it with a high feelings..

Reviews

[lady france]

it's really sad to miss the friend you've trusted for so long...

[CHRIS ANDES]

is it regrets??..haha,just kidding..
...wonderful thoughts!!

[Coyote Poetry]

Love and friendship when mind and heart is innocent. Best days and memories. I like the story in the poem. Thank you for the very good poem.
Coyote

[Canicus]

you did a good job on this. I liked the way you ended it. keep it up.

[paparapapa]

Yeah, a little bit of subject-verb inconsistencies here and there, but a little bit of editing can definitely improve this a lot. The feeling's honest and pure making this one beautiful. And I love its straightforwardness. Great job. :)

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

I like the feelings in this... nicely said about those feelings, with the " rope between us." and comparing days.