MERE IV

You have the finest arms

I've ever seen.

I just couldn't resist it's

The oh so milk-like complexion,

The smooth textured skin,

In general your awesomely dandy arms.

I've known you for almost three years

But only yesterday that my eyes get to

Noticed your flawless arms.

I really can't explain the feeling

Of that memorable glance.

I really also can't believe

That I'm in love merely with the
Arms but not with the man.

Author's Note

love getting comments.....

Reviews

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

Nice lines, I like how you ended this with the last 2 lines.

[Gene Hiccup]

That I'm in love merely with the
Arms but not with the man.
I love these lines!!!

[Seanne Tholltree]

thank you..

[lady france]

nice writing..

[paparapapa]

Haha. I love the last two lines. There really are times when we think we are in love with the man, but in truth, we just love the security that they bring. Great message! Just polish it a little bit more since I saw a few errors when it comes to grammar. But still, great poem from you! ;)

[natzky]

harhar...i already have a hint about that mysterious guy....this poem is really cute...maurag k tlgah nhe.....

[CHRIS ANDES]

...?????.i'm clueless about who's you're talking about..