ZILA AND KUH

my 2nd poetry

Why is Zila like that? Is Kuh really that funny?

That whenever Kuh answers a question, Zila always laugh.

Are kuh’s ideas truly that hilarious?

But Kuh know that it is serious and sensible.

Yes! Kuh is a jolly person, but it doesn’t merit her

To be a clown to laugh at, even on serious times.

Kuh really thought of her every answer very carefully

And sometimes it came from the root.

Eventually when Zila started to laugh, Kuh also laugh

But deep inside is a wondering ego thinking that

The effort is not well appreciated and being laugh at.

Kuh can’t do anything about Zila,

So she just happily thought of how smart she is to hit

Three birds with one stone, first stone is that she’s able to

Think differently, second she made Zila happy and most importantly,

Kuh left a mark that Zila won’t forget

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Richard Layne]

I didn't like it until the end and the mark Zila won't forget. a little hard to follow for me but i get the point and agree.

[CHRIS ANDES]

sorry coz i'm like zila sometimes..
...just absurb it in a positive way...xD

[lady france]

just can't get through this poem..'cause this poem is really made for me...

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

Nice little story in a poem, i like these lines:
"Three birds with one stone, first stone is that she’s able to
Think differently, second she made Zila happy and most importantly,"

[lady france]

i somewhat can relate since my classmates also laugh at my (witty) ideas..hehe

[lady france]

maybe zila laugh not for fun but for happiness..kuh must be proud because she spread happiness

[lady france]

oh it's so wonderful,,i just love it