MERE XXXIII

Damn it Seanne!

My untold desire has been fulfilled at last

It sweetly arrived as expected

Though it lasted only for a few seconds,

I psyched that you also yearns for it

So I initiated the adjoining of oils once more.

It felt so good that you’re part of me.

I know that you love me and you know that I love you

Because it secretly shows when

We caught each other’s eyes

Though it’s not boldly uttered and of course

We don’t want it to be publicized,

But somewhere in our merely very private secret selves

I could hear a shriek, a shrill and a squeak! 

Reviews

[Keith LaFountaine]

You may want to edit it a bit for flow, but otherwise you've got a promising base here!

[Seanne Tholltree]

ok thanks..

[MoriartyMesa]

Little edits are needed but there is a nice solid ground of work.

[Seanne Tholltree]

thank you..:)