MERE XIX

At first, you seem just ordinary to me.
No attraction, no affection not even a plain admiration,
like what others felt.
I just nod when they utter your name,
I even don't pay much attention to you.
But it was your hop that caught my senses,
That was really unusual for someone like you doing that thing,
Because of that, I tend to be on the look for your next unusual acts.
All of a sudden your glance with matching swaying eyebrows, a grin
Your sweet voice that calls my name
Makes me throb, I don't know why
But I guess this shouldn't be happening
As much as I wanted,
Because you and I is merely entering the same door sign.

Reviews

[Amata Luna]

Emotions and words... These two things sure do a lot when it comes to expressing ourselves right? Once again you gave the spark and a glimpse of what I've always looked into from you. ;) "At first, you seem just ordinary to me." And when you blinked, as fast as you did it, you find your world have changed. Isn't that how the heart speaks? :))) Just great. Keep it up. ;)

[MoriartyMesa]

Nothing seemed forced in this, but there was a little raw emotion. Nice.

[Coyote Poetry]

Some people can excite our soul by a hello. I enjoyed the story in the poem. Some people have a aura that make us smile and we want to hear them talk and be near. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Seanne Tholltree]

thank you for getting the point...

[Gene Hiccup]

spells like P-H-I-L..hahaha

[natzky]

hahah...lolz.;)

[Seanne Tholltree]

shut up hiccup baby

[natzky]

whoa....I really love the first three lines....
(At first, you seem just ordinary to me.
No attraction, no affection not even a plain admiration,
like what others felt.)
i can relate to that...lolz...:0